Wednesday, December 29, 2010

This Morning There Was Hope





























For three-word Wednesday
buckle, evade, wedge

He was trying to wedge himself next to her, but the subway was full and there wasn’t even room enough for that. A nearby drunk belched fouled air, momentarily polluting the mood. She coughed, trying to evade the kindness of his smile, before returning one of her own. He would stand next to her tomorrow and perhaps find the courage to finally say “hello.” For now, there was nothing in the world but the hope that his knees wouldn’t buckle when he saw her again, and that she would say “hello” back to him before the doors of the subway opened up to rush her away.

5 comments:

  1. One moment among many, captured gently.

    Nice.

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  2. This piece resonates with the thrill of new attraction. So very inviting and exciting; and something we all need to feel fully alive.

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  3. So much talent. So much to say. So much heart. So much soul. Hugs, Dawn

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  4. Oh, this aches to read. But I love the hope in it. Gently done, and lovely.

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